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Lucky Seven Tag: An (R Rated) Excerpt From The Rental

April 10, 2012

Move over Time Warp Tuesday! My good friend Erica tagged me in one of those internet game thingies.  Here are the rules, Erica’s words:

The rules to the Lucky Seven are as follows: *Open the document for your current MS/WIP (manuscript or work-in-progress for the non-writers out there) *Go to page 7 or to page 77 *Go to line 7 *Copy the next 7 lines (sentences or paragraphs) and post them exactly as they are written. No changing or cheating! *Tag 7 authors and let them know.

To see Erica’s most awesome excerpt, visit her blog.

Believe it or not, this tag game happens to be perfect timing. This is because the cover art for my upcoming short story, The Rental was just sent to me this week and I am bursting to reveal it. Now I can offer up my very first excerpt and my cover at the same time. Yay!

Let’s start with my seven sentence excerpt from starting with the seventh line on the seventh page. Oh, be warned, it’s smack dab in the middle of a sex scene so, if you’re under 18 or overly sensitive, do not read any further.

(I knew you’d still be here. heh heh.)


He allowed his fingers to join in, shoving my panties aside and spreading my labia so his tongue could delve inside me. Eventually, he replaced his tongue with his fingers, first one and then another. He skillfully curled and twisted his digits, moving his oral attention back to my clit. The slow, lazy heat spreading from my belly now whipped violently throughout my body. My clitoris swelled and pulsed under his tongue. My head rolled back and forth as my pleasure intensified, nearing climax. Without any instruction from my brain, my body rocked back and forth against his touch, and then—

He stopped.

And now for the cover!

The Rental erotica

I hope I have piqued your interest! Now, if you absolutely can’t wait for The Rental to come out, likely later this month, please feel free to purchase a copy of my just released novella, The Rusty Nail. It is a wicked story with a little bit of everything.

And now I get to tag seven other people…here goes.








I would love to see what these twitter peeps are working on right now.


10 Comments leave one →
  1. April 10, 2012 9:05 am

    Ummm, wow, on page 7 you say? Lol. I will picking this up as soon as I comes out. 🙂 thanks for sharing.

  2. April 10, 2012 2:38 pm

    Good lord! The Rental looks pretty awesome so far! *fans self* Thanks for the tagging love, though I’m pretty sure my lines won’t be quite that steamy, regardless if they’re from page 7 OR 77!! 😉

    • April 10, 2012 3:40 pm

      I can’t wait to see what you have on the go, Lisa! Thanks for the comment love!

  3. Raiscara Avalon permalink
    April 10, 2012 5:49 pm

    Mine were creepy, yours were steamy lmao. Loved it! 🙂

    • April 10, 2012 8:07 pm

      Okay, next challenge. We both try to create something steamy and creepy. LOL! I’m off to read yours now.

  4. April 10, 2012 6:08 pm

    Wow…when you said steamy, you didn’t lie! I knew it was going to be fun tagging you, DC! Thanks for playing along. Good luck with the Rental. I’ll be sure to get that one as soon as it’s available!!


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